I bang this thin sheet...
A poem from Rusty Morrison’s remarkable collection the true keeps calm biding its story (Ahsahta Press, 2008). The book, a meditation on loss, is divided into nine major sections, each section containing six poems of three three-line stanzas – each line must end with the words stop, please, or advise. The lines are right justified.
“sky speaks…”
sky speaks with an accent like worship stop
a temporary lifelessness in your eyes where I pour my waiting palaces stop
the pearliest part of a memory is lost to its lack of consequence please
rub a little chalk on both palms and then reach stop
was I the mad girl eyes white like blossoms stop
or just the rescuer who turned accomplice please
so cold the air is granular against skin’s gray stop
I bang this thin sheet of tin and call it listening stop
do the reckless simply hear the avalanche before the rest of us please advise
2 comments:
That's very effective: does it remain so over the whole work?
The collective force of the form is powerful, and is sustained throughout the book. A strong read.
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